The point is not about criticizing others. It is about the fact that irrespective of who does it, it should convey what the component is doing.
You like speaking for other people.
Why I bother explaining this to you is beyond me. I am responding to a two-fold criticism by Ron Resnick and asked him for information. If he leveled insubstantial criticism for what you do in your finance job, you'd probably defend yourself too.
Forum member gshelley asked: "what is tonal density?" We were discussing
descriptions of tonality, not components. I said I used the term "tonal depth".
In response, Ron Resnick cited a sentence fragment that I mentioned as an example in conjunction with the discussion of tonal words. That fragment came at the very end of a review paragraph describing (part of) what I heard from a component under review. I gave a Web reference for the review. I mentioned I used the phrase "tonal depth" rather than tonal density.
I do not understand why Ron Resnick decided to turn the discussion away from talking about gshelley's question and criticize me for a review I wrote 17 years ago -- not mind you for what the review actually said or for its relevance to describing tonality -- but 1) in relation to something he believes I said about someone else's writing and 2) for a sentence fragment failing to describe "what the electronics in that component are doing".
But whether about someone else's writing or about the component, neither of you bother to consider the context from which the sentence fragment was lifted. Taking something out of its intended context and using that for some other purpose is never a wise tactic for criticism. Here's the paragraph from that review:
"In quiet passages, drummers often mark a beat by laying a drumstick across a snare with the stick’s head resting on the skin and the other end on the snare’s rim while striking this drumstick with the other -- wood on wood with empathetic vibrations into the drum head. To give an example, I’ll choose an album you may know. Consider the title track from Dire Straits'
Brothers in Arms [Warner Brothers 1-25264]. The ATS-90s present each stroke precisely. You hear the initial
snick as one stick bites into the other, then the resulting resonance through the stick into the drumhead and the air within, and then it fades away. It happens very fast. I sensed this
tonal depth on hearing the sonic variation between one drumstick striking the other slightly closer to the rim versus closer to the drumhead. These are fine-spun differences, yet the ATS-90s pull them from the groove to give an incredibly realistic picture of a musician at his instrument. And the Nightingale amps let us hear how the drummer’s beat takes on a different overtone when one stroke is harder than another. The faintest of high-hat touches have a crisp initial strike as wood meets brass, then a satisfying resultant
tizz and decay. You can hear the decay from the Hammond Leslie horns rotating in their cabinets for what seems like forever after a finger is lifted from keyboard. Amid everything else going on in the tune, wherever your ear is drawn, the Nightingale amps
let you hear deeply into tonal structures that ultimately breathe life and immediacy into the music."
The bolded words above are the fragment Ron Resnick took as his focus and labeled a "flowery feel good metaphor" and as failing to describe what the electronics of the component are doing. (Regardless of whether reader Resnick thought them "flowery", the emphasized words are not a metaphor - he should know better.) The reader can judge for himself if what I wrote is a description of a specific component's sound. I'm confident it is.
I don't care if he likes my writing but when Ron Resnick charges that it is similar to what I criticized someone else for writing (flowery metaphors), then first, that seems a very strained attack and he needs to show me where he believes that occurred. Otherwise it is BS. I label his an attack because his remarks had nothing to do with the current discussion, came out of nowhere, and were entirely gratuitous.
The above quoted paragraph and the rest of the sound portion of the review does not convey what "the electronics in a component are doing" as Ron Resnick cited me for failing to do. I"m not an EE and don't describe what electronics do to cause the sound they have -- such would be boring to many and not suited for the sound portion of a review. Rather, what I do is to describe what I hear and occasionally my reaction to that.
As I've said, these type of threads are not really your style. Be cheeky elsewhere.
Excuse the further interruption.